Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Music Of The Memory

                         What is value? Well i believe value is something of cost or something that means a lot to someone. Everyone has valuable items, they’’re not often the same. How do you know when something is valuable to you? You know when it can make you feel multiple emotions and when it makes you feel like you never want to lose it. Like it’s important in your life. I value a lot of things, but some a little more than others. Like my camera that's full of my family! or when i'm listening or singing music! I value those because they describe my passion and sources in emotions.
    I’ve always loved to sing or listen to music. It honestly puts me in a great mood. I’ve learned to express my emotions through my love of music. I have been obsessed with music since i was very very young. I remember joining concert choir and singing my heart out on the stage with all my friends and musicians.    I was at school and i was in fourth grade. My music teacher, Ms. Simpkins told us what time to be at the concert. I was so very excited, my first concert! I couldn't wait! As i got at the elementary school at 6pm with my parents and grandma. My heart was racing and my hands were a little clammy. I was now very nervous. I went in and found my friends and felt instantly better. I sang my heart out! Hearing the claps and cheers all around us, and then i knew we did good! Since that day i’ve always wanted to be a singer.
     My other favourite thing i value are the pictures i have taken with and of my family. My family is naturally huge, we all live all over, it becomes bigger because my friends are my family too. Anyway  i love taking photos of everything! I like catching my family off guard with its bright flash and then listen to them complain. I remember my cousins wedding, i took so many pictures and posted them on face book, it was when i truly became in love with pictures.   Julie and Pe had already gotten married and we were at the after party. Julie had given me her camera to take pictures with, so i was taking pictures with her camera, my camera and my parents camera. Talk about a lot. I was tired, it had been five hours of dancing, singing, clicking and flashes and laughing too! I thought it was really cool that Julie trusted me, a 14 year old clutz, with her really expensive camera! I mean wow... That’s just awesome! That whole night i sang, took pictures and danced with my family!
                         I would have to say my music would be priced, because i buy music all the time! The type of music i buy is all types, but i'm not a major country fan so not a lot of those. I would have to say the picture taking of my families has to be priceless! Those moments i will have forever and that's why there priceless! 
                         That’s why i value them. So in conclusion, you know why i have such passion for these two things and why they are valuable to me. Well i should go, you should think about what you value now.

1 comment:

  1. HEYY CHARITY...
    1. The author is trying to tell us that everything has value, it all depends on how you value it. If you feel strongly about someone or something it has value. She most values music and taking pictures of her family.

    2. When you described the wedding and pictures it was vivid. For example, "i took so many pictures and posted them on face book, it was when i truly became in love with pictures. Julie and Pe had already gotten married and we were at the after party. Julie had given me her camera to take pictures with, so i was taking pictures with her camera, my camera and my parents camera. Talk about a lot."

    3. Overall, you had very good word choice and grammar. Also, your introduction was done well. for example, "What is value? Well i believe value is something of cost or something that means a lot to someone. Everyone has valuable items, they’’re not often the same. How do you know when something is valuable to you? You know when it can make you feel multiple emotions and when it makes you feel like you never want to lose it. Like it’s important in your life." was done well.

    4. What do you think would happened if you described the music a bit more. try to make it a little more vivid. other than that, great job !! ♥

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