A SIMPLE REVENGE
It was a late night and daddy was late for dinner. My mom was very worried that he got in trouble with his co-workers. Frankly, i hope he did. My dad was a mean jerk and i didn’t like him.
“Oh my goodness! Where is Tony?” My mother spoke worriedly. And as if on cue, my dad walked into the house with a angered look.
“Tony, where have you been? “ Mom asked.
“At work, Mary.” He responded rudely.
I have had no idea what happened next, i zoned out, but all of sudden he was yelling and screaming at her Damian, my brother, ran down the stairs and hide me somewhere, so i didn’t have to watch it.
“Damian.....Why does mommy and daddy fight?” i asked him.
“It’s there test.”
“Test?”
“Yes, Crystal. A test, God is testing them to see if there love for each other can survive every fight”
“I think it’s more force than love for each other....” I spoke angered
“ Oh Crystal, you know that isn’t true. Dad loves all of us and wouldn’t hurt us.”
“Hmph, right.”
Mom walked over to us, crying “Dinner is ready, sniff”
We went to the table and did our prayers
Dad asked me “what did you pray for, Crystal?”
I responded “ For you to be dead.”
My dad had chuckled and mumbled something about, me taken over the business instead of Damian. We finished our dinner in utter silence after that, then it all happened all too fast. A familular lookingman bursted into our house and shot my mother and father in the head, I ran. Ran up the stairs and hid. I heard another loud BANG! and then talking downstairs. I don’t know how long i waited before heading down the stairs, but when I went down, I wished I didn’t. My mother, father and brother all laid dead on the ground bleeding out.......
I jumped up from my bed, gasping and panting. I just had a nightmare about my family being killed again. It happens almost every night. I haven’t got a good nights sleep since that night. The cops had came, my uncle got custody over me blah blah blah! I eventually left them, moved on in life, got a job, a home the normal stuff. I've been wondering why i recognized that man ever since that night. I just wanted to move on from that night. Though I never moved on... I knew that, I mean the constant nightmares, the guilt, they’re bleeding out images burned into my brain. I sighed and got up out of the bed. I have a meeting with one of my co-workers today. How fun. I mean being a lawyer is fun and all and i love being one but i’m just sooo tired and it’s not very suspenseful.
~fast forward to meeting~
She walked into my office, I looked her over, checking her body language. I was always a cautious one, making sure they didn’t seem dangerous or how they would react to sudden things.
“Hello, Crystal” she spoke, her voice soft but seemed a little edgy
“Hi, thank you for coming here today Selfina” i spoke calmly
“Oh, call me Selly.”
“Okay, thank you for coming Selly” i said with a slight chuckle
“Hmm so i wanted to have this meeting with you because i found some interesting information out.” She said, her voice now tinged with sorrow
“About your client or something else?”
“Something else, of course”
“What would that be?”
Selly places a file on her desk “Read this...” then she turns and leaves.
~hours later~
I was angry. Unfundable pissed off. I read that file, and the whole thing it was about was the man who killed my family. It was one of my dad's business workers, Jonathan. He never liked my dad, since he was the leader of the mafia.. and now, I know where he hides out... I want him killed. Murdered. Destroyed......and I know how exactly to accomplish that. Later that night, I went and sent out a hunt.
I snuck into his house, my knife in my belt, my other weapons in other parts of my clothing well hidden from sight. I walked quietly through the house, to the kitchen where we has standing at the counter, making something that looked like a salad. I wanted him to know who his killer was....I wanted to him to see who ended it all for him. I standed in the doorway and leaned against the wall
“Hello, Jonathan” i spoke, my voice cold and dark. Jon jumped and turned
“Ummmm......D-do i know you?”
“Hmmm, kinda. You know my family better.”
“Your family?”
“Yeah, you know the Burchess’? The family that you walked in at dinner and shot at mercilessly.” I sounded angry
“O-o-ohhh.... Your Crystal?.....” he sounded frightened
“And so the man meet his killer.”
When he heard my words, he reached over and grabbed a knife and lunged at me. I grabbed his arm as he slammed into me. I twisted his arm behind him, and he shrieked in pain. I slammed him against the wall and whispered in his ear “Are you happy with your decisions, Jonathan?”
“Grrrrrr.”
It was his time to go now. I took the knife from his hand, and slammed it into his spine. The man continued to scream as I grabbed his neck and yanked his head back and threw him down onto the ground. I grabbed a spoon and pushes hard into his stomach and continues to stab him with the spoon, being completely ruthless. I began scooping out his parts, pulling out his long intestines and I reached in a pulled out his liver and kidneys.
“Mmmm, i could give these to a hospital for organ donations” I laughed, amused at my strange comment. Jonathan was long dead now, I felt happy about my revenge but i needed to hide the body....... So i went a found hydrochloric acid and I poured it on his body and parts that where scatter from him. I watched them disintegrate and disappear forever. I walked over to the oven and set a towel on it, and when it caught on fire, I ran out before anyone saw the house fire.
~Later on in the week~
The fire had been all over the news. I smiled at the thought of my revenge. That night, something changed in me..... I liked what killing felt like...I liked the blood and screams i saw and heard from my victim. Maybe.....just maybe, I could have that feeling again.....Yeah, i’d like that, I smiled wickedly as the thoughts in my head gave me the best idea ever. HAHAHA!!
THE END!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete1. Crystal say her family die and she went and killed the man that killed them.
2. Crystal changed over time bye first being a little girl then, lawyer, the killer.
3. My favorite part of the story was when she went to the guys house and decided to kill the killer of her family.
4. The bet quality of the story was when she was taking out the organs and liver whit a spoon.
5. The story's theme was killing and murder and freaky and, Shannon loved it themed :)
6. Tell people to read this if they like scary, blood, and stuff like.
Great Job!!